Monday, November 12, 2007

Lost in one dimension: thought

this rusty attempt at a poem is inspired by reading "the Power of now".


me me me,
defending me,
completing me,
continuous seeking,
continuous conflict.
obessed by things,
filled up with things,
posessed by things,
in the grip of thoughts.
my attention is needed,
things need to be dealt with,
but deal with one thing here,
three more pop up there.
not alone for long,
not relaxed for long,
succesful one day,
miserable the next.

4 comments:

eni said...

girl this one is good!

Bana said...

thanks Eni. nuk me duket se rrjedh shume mire, po megjithate, me pelqen.

belle_fleur said...

the message is clear "successful one day, misserable the next" - true!

keep it up cuz i know you have it within you to write poems!

akullnaja said...

I agree with Belle, you should continue!

I find the beginning quite poetic!

Përshëndetje!
:)